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Re: A Titleless Story (5)
HOLY CHRISTMAS CAKES OF CHRIST. I'm here. I'm reviewing. So let's get this dizzle started! Srsbisnz (serious business) I'm truly ever so sorry for all this delaying! HERE IS ONE ...
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: Everyday You're Gone is like a Thousand Days Have Passed.
A good friend of mine wrote this and wanted me to post it here. She would love to have help to make this a good poem. It's dedicated to her ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to Miami: Chapter 2. [Revised and Rewritten!]
edited and rewritten!
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to Miami: Chapter 4.
there are young adult clubs, with no alcohal. but I still have to rewrite like 3948098234 of this. hahaha
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to Miami: Epilogue.
Yeppers! I am(: Here is the epilogue to the story, it's kind of short. I'm actually not happy with it at all, so reviews and any advice would be GREAT.:D ...
Oct 15, 2008 -
Re: Oi Pierre
Thank you.
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Secrets of Desperation ;4
I really need help on these chapters. Please, any help I could get would be great! Thanks! Know Your Place ; It was Saturday morning and I walked into work ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (4)
HI! okay here we go. leaving his six months pregnant wife behind. How tragic. Well when we first start reading this, we're not exactly sure if this is in first ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (3)
Hey. I got your message so Im back! :D Okay, let's see. breath I feel this should be 'breaths'. He was totally unaware of what she was about to do. ...
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (2)
Haha no problem! Yeah I got my quote html thing ready and I was like oh my god - nothing's wrong!
Sep 28, 2008 -
Re: Secrets of Desperation ;3
This chapter's longer than the rest... Missing?! “Hello, Alicia.” It turns out, Alicia’s desk was placed right next to mine. Today Alicia’s bob was pinned back on both sides of ...
Sep 28, 2008 -
Re: Heart Stabbed Blade Chapter 2: toji talks a lot (edit)
Hey, Im sorry for this taking oh so long. I'm about to shoot school off the face of the universe []:< Anyways, let's see... “Here come the lovers” was the ...
Sep 28, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (2)
Look at Lucy go with all her reviews, Little miss popular over hurr(: Haha okay let's see... Oh.. wow. Just, wow - great job. There's nothing wrong with it (from ...
Sep 28, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [2]
Banned for living in England.!
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: The User Below You...
pssh! I wish! TPBM has a cell phone.
Sep 21, 2008
